To help someone understand vision.
Difficult. By itself.
More so
when
it is clear they want to write pornography and
their hang up
is finding a way to frame it
in story telling
geared to illicit
masturbation
more than wonder and
expecting wonder
to somehow follow
of its own.
The old adage comes to mind:
do not give it the old college try, but do
go dick around,
go get laid,
go
do whatever. You'll find your voice and
you might not,
but
right now,
with the things in hand you can see
along with the things
you have in hand
that you cannot see
with eyes not your own,
is a bad time
to flirt
with edges.
